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高中英语作文1600字:借喻抒怀:一颗闪亮的星-A Shining Star

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高中英语作文1600字:借喻抒怀:一颗闪亮的星-A Shining Star

一颗闪亮的星
【内容提示】
你刚上高中时认为某一学科进修有艰苦,而教这门课的某某师长教员对先生异常担任。他(或她)对你停止耐烦的赞助,常常指导你做演习,让你有更多的机会答复成绩,还教你进修办法,给你供给学惯用品等,这使你对这门课产生了进修兴趣,进修成就也从而好了起来。这位师长教员在你的心中是一颗闪亮的星,照射着你进步的门路。
【作文示范】
a shining star
a teacher just likes a shining star to students. miss fu, one of my english teacher, is a shining star in my life.
i happened to be in miss fu's class when i began my high school years. at that time, i dared not speak english aloud in public, for i was shy and my pronunciation and intonation① were poor. afraid of being laughed at, i never put up my hand to answer the questions miss fu raised in class, even if i had some good answers to them. for a time, i even lost interest in practising spoken english. when miss fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak. first she bought me some english tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them. in class, i was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise speaking.
little by little, i became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak english before others. miss fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that i had been chosen to take part in an important oral english contest②.
whenever i look at the stars in the sky, i recognize the brightest one ---- the symbol of miss fu in my heart. miss fu will always be a shining star in my life!
(选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第1期)
【词语解释】
①intonation [?int+u'neim+n] n.腔调;声调
②contest ['k&ntest] n.比赛;比赛
【写法指要】
本文用意味的手段把师长教员比做心中闪亮的星星,表达了作者对师长教员的感激之情和崇拜心境。文章引言段用的是“漏斗式”(the funnel)引入法,即由普通到详细的办法,正如漏斗似的上宽下窄。第一句以明喻(simile)的修辞格把全部师长教员比做闪亮的星星,第二句详细到作者心中的师长教员。第二段写师长教员若何赞助作者进修英语。第三段写作者的进步和成功。开头段与引言段照应,反复漏斗式办法,最后一句用隐喻(metaphor)重提本身生射中的闪亮之星——付师长教员。
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